Brochure editing: Before and after

Editing for people: From "about us" to "for you"

This provider of consulting and technology solutions for equity compensation compliance asked me if I could rewrite its brochure content in advance of an upcoming tradeshow. Of course I could!

The original brochure content was affected by the same ills that plague many promotional brochures today:

  • Predominantly written in the third person, and thus difficult and uninviting to read
  • Lack of headings to help readers navigate through the content
  • About the company instead of about the reader

View the consulting brochure sample

Click the image below to view a side-by-side comparison of the before and after versions. 

The before and after versions of an edited brochure for a tech company

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About the Author

Renae Gregoire is a marketing writer, editor, critical thinker, obsessive questioner, and excellent-results deliverer. Although writing is her talent, empathy is her Super Power; she combines both into a potent formula for creating content experiences that lead more people to YES!